Post- peer review post

After reading what Matt had to say about my paper I felt good. I knew that even so early in the stages of my web text he could understand what my point was and was able to understand everything I was trying to say. I learned that I should put more information about today's economy in the web text and possibly find some more sources. Also, I need to add pictures and charts if I want to make my web text effective and want to have people actually want to read it.